A very cute, simple story to kick off Stories for Planet Nude! I have to admit though, I felt the pacing was a bit rushed, with scenes and dialogue moving too quickly; not to mention the grammatical and formatting errors. But overall, it was a fun read. 🙂
Thanks Ted, I enjoyed your writing.
Thanks for the kind words, Tim.
I love the Joni Mitchell homage.
A very cute, simple story to kick off Stories for Planet Nude! I have to admit though, I felt the pacing was a bit rushed, with scenes and dialogue moving too quickly; not to mention the grammatical and formatting errors. But overall, it was a fun read. 🙂
Thanks for the story. Nice read.
Can someone tell me what "losing the bottle" means?
Losing your bottle ... losing your nerve